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question:Q: Read the following article and answer the question. Article: What is it that makes a house a home ? A home is a place of companionship with people in it who love each other , who are harmonious and closer inside with one another than they are outside with those in the workplace or with classmates at school . A home is a place of companionship that it's difficult to leave. In a home there is love , sharing and appreciation , and the members help each other . I have seen families on the street. But if they live , sleep , talk , and eat together , they are a family, even if they are poorly off. You don't need a roof to make a home. The truly homeless are some of the rich people who build multi-million-dollar houses and are too busy to live in them . The truly homeless are those who have turned their home into a hotel lobby . The parents work. The children do wrong . They don't talk and eat together every day . They rarely see each other . The truly homeless people are _ with babysitters , caretakers , gardeners and maids. Parents are unaware , too busy making money outside the home that they don't live in . This is another way of looking at the rich and the homeless . Who is to be pitied ? Control of the computer and the Internet is also important to make a house into a home. If the computer is on all the time , the house turns into an office, even if everyone is at home . Many homes these days are just offices. Human communication has stopped . The computer eats up the time that one should be giving to others within the home . Using the computer moderately gives us time for gentleness , play and communication , not with a screen , but with a human being. Question: Which statement is Not True according to the passage ? Answer: Select from the following. I. A home is a place where you are willing to stay . II. Even the poorest person can have a happy home . III. Computers and the Internet are important for a happy family. IV. Sometimes it's the rich that should be pitied . The answer is:
answer:III. Computers and the Internet are important for a happy family.
question:Provide feedback on the following sentence: By partnering with school districts, cities are able build trust with their community while addressing issues of poverty.
answer:The sentence is a good start, but it could be improved for clarity and grammar. Here's a suggested revision: Cities can build trust with their communities and address poverty issues by partnering with school districts. I made a few changes to enhance the sentence. First, I added the auxiliary verb can to make the sentence more grammatically correct and to indicate the potential for cities to build trust. I also changed their community to their communities to make the language more inclusive and accurate, as cities typically serve multiple communities. Finally, I rearranged the sentence to put the main action (partnering with school districts) at the end, making it clearer how cities can achieve the stated goals. This reorganization also improves the sentence's overall flow and readability.
question:Provide feedback on the following 3-sentence paragraph: The idea of partnering to address poverty can seem daunting. Many have tried various partnership models but it is the true collaboration that leads to results in cities. There are multiple cities who have successfully implemented partnerships to reduce poverty.
answer:This paragraph is a good start, but it could be improved for clarity, coherence, and impact. Here's a suggested revision: Addressing poverty through partnerships can seem daunting, but the right collaborative approach can lead to tangible results. While many attempts at partnership models have fallen short, some cities have successfully implemented collaborative efforts to reduce poverty. These success stories offer valuable lessons for other cities seeking to make a meaningful impact. I made several changes to enhance the paragraph. First, I rephrased the first sentence to make it more concise and direct, emphasizing the potential benefits of collaboration. In the second sentence, I changed true collaboration to the right collaborative approach to make the language more specific and actionable. I also added some cities to provide a clearer subject for the sentence and to set up the third sentence. Finally, I revised the third sentence to make it more engaging and forward-looking, suggesting that the successes of other cities can inform and inspire future efforts. This revised paragraph has a clearer narrative thread and a more optimistic tone.
question:Can the sentence be more concise while retaining or improving impact and meaning?
answer:Here's a suggested revision of the paragraph with a focus on conciseness: Addressing poverty through partnerships can seem daunting, but the right collaboration can drive results. While many attempts have fallen short, some cities have achieved significant success through collaborative efforts. These successes offer valuable lessons for others seeking to make a meaningful impact. I made a few tweaks to make the language more concise while maintaining or even improving the impact. For example, I replaced tangible results with drive results to make the language more dynamic and action-oriented. I also changed successfully implemented collaborative efforts to reduce poverty to achieved significant success through collaborative efforts to make the sentence more concise and focused on the outcome. These revisions aim to preserve the essential meaning and message of the original paragraph while presenting it in a more streamlined and effective way.